Some of my writing goals for the upcoming quarter are, focus on my sentence fluency and ideas. Even though my ideas are average, I believe that I can surpass that and make my ideas even more clear and supported with details.
Sunday, October 19, 2008
Writer Assessment
As a writer I've come along way. My ideas now are more clear than before, they come across as thoughtful, and well supported by details. In my Coming of Age paper, my teacher assessment was a 3/4. I cut out the excess parts in my revision to make the ideas more clear. My self assessment for organization in my College Essay was a 4, I said my organization makes sense and goes with the flow. each paragraph goes from the basketball comparision to the life comparision. My peer assessment for my college essay on voice from Tristen was " This paper really sounds like you, cause we all know how much you love basketball." My teacher assessment for word choice on my Coming of Age paper was a 3, I need to work on verbs, and I need to notice that most of my descriptive words are the ones that describe the feelings. My peer assessment on sentence fluency from Kasey on my College Essay was " Maybe it's the whole sentecne fluency thing but the beginning seems like a list that should be separated with commas rather than periods."
Thursday, October 2, 2008
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